Wasn't great
I appreciate the fact that you were trying to tell a serious story (or whatever) but there was like a full 2 minutes of extranious animation at the beginning there, that could have easily been sliced off, horrible to make the viewer sit through, slow & chuggy (choo choo- steam train style)
Speed it up dude, and it will make your stuff better to watch.
-Don't know why this one is almost sitting on 4/5-